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An Epilogue ( Critisism please! ) posted 19 November 2008 in Member Written WorksAn Epilogue ( Critisism please! ) by srancchieftan, Candidate

Very good. Your writing is powerful. I was able to feel the emotion of the characters, the glory they felt. Your writing style is very good, i wouldnt change that. However I would have liked more description, and attention to detail. Try describing the location and characters more. view post


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