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Week One: Replay posted 19 July 2004 in Member Written WorksWeek One: Replay by Sovin Nai, Site Administrator

I liked it, and I wouldn't add any more detail. I think if you did it would sound forced, and I think it is this excess detail which plagues so many beginning authors. After reading it, I had a perfect impression in my mind of the scene. In fact, if anything I would say lose some dramatic descriptions in the first couple paragraphs.

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