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Midviel: Solicitude posted 23 April 2006 in Member Written WorksMidviel: Solicitude by Primal, Peralogue

I don't know if you want a critique or not, so I'll make it short.

Listen, words are visual. "many lay dead" "even more lay suffering" Not very visual. It doesn't draw us into the scene. view post


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