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RipTide posted 09 March 2006 in Member Written WorksRipTide by Dawnstorm, Candidate

Quote: "Cu Roi":2kyyua2b
Also, Homer to Ms. Clifton to me. Credit where credit is due. <!-- s;) --><img src="{SMILIES_PATH}/icon_wink.gif" alt=";)" title="Wink" /><!-- s;) --> My brother was named Aeneas.[/quote:2kyyua2b]

Hehe, how could that escape me!

So I take it the basic frame of the piece is solid. The staccato beginning and the transiton into death worked?


Worked well for me. Good transition, with the staccato petering out into more conventional text (kind of like the wet area between sea and beach where water keeps lapping).

I think the frame holds up well. view post


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